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Edited by: kind_warrior May 16, 09, 12:04AM
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Hello! I am an ESL and this is my first post on this forum. I want to get your feedback about one of the essay writing service that eliminates the chance of any money-loss on part of students. They have the security policy in their favor in which they give students the opportunity to make payment within 6-8 hours and in case they fail to do so they publish their essay online in hundreds of web-pages online to make it plagiarized.
They clearly says they don't wanna reveal their physical address for the sake of their privacy. I have no concern with who they are and where they are based but only with the service quality. Students are only supposed to make payment if they find their paper to be non-plagiarized and as per his/her specification.
Well as far as I am concerned, I have tried their service but didn't make the payment and up till now they have not applied their security policy to my paper at least. It was the college application essay. As soon as I get rid of money-broke, i will make the payment!
You can check their sales page over: www.ukessaywriting.com
How would you take their service as?
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Edited by: humble May 16, 09, 03:01AM
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I will teach you guys advertising today
We would be analyzing an ad base on AIDA model (attention interest desire action)
The ad above is a good example of how one can, without breaking rules explicitly, manage to successfully advertise a service.
Attention:Hello! I am an ESL and this is my first post on this forum. I want to get your feedback about one of the essay writing service that eliminates the chance of any money-loss on part of students.
The first section grabs the attention of the readers by infroming them that there exists a service that eliminates the chance of any money-loss on part of students
Interest:They have the security policy in their favor in which they give students the opportunity to make payment within 6-8 hours and in case they fail to do so they publish their essay online in hundreds of web-pages online to make it plagiarized.
They clearly says they don't wanna reveal their physical address for the sake of their privacy. I have no concern with who they are and where they are based but only with the service quality. Students are only supposed to make payment if they find their paper to be non-plagiarized and as per his/her specification.
This section develops an interest in the service and highlights the unique feature of this service i.e Students are only supposed to make payment if they find their paper to be non-plagiarized and as per his/her specification The ad also eliminates any chance of a possible attack by morons such WB, EW, OR, LAV and my humble self, on the location and legitimacy of the company. This gives the service provider a decent shield, and portrays its anonymity in a positive way.
Desire: Well as far as I am concerned, I have tried their service but didn't make the payment and up till now they have not applied their security policy to my paper at least. It was the college application essay. As soon as I get rid of money-broke, i will make the payment!
This section of the ad brings forth a positive experience of a customer and hence ignites a desire in the readers to try the service. It also acts as a promotional offer : PAY ONLY IF YOU LIKE, OR ORDER FOR FREE PAY IF THE PRODUCT IS OK.
Action:
You can check their sales page over: ukessaywriting.com
The ad does not leave the readers with any question it explicitly asks them to visit the page which is a prerequisite for making a purchase.
And in the end feedback collection was also kept in mind. Feedback is very important in improving the effectiveness of ads
How would you take their service as?
Any questions?
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| WritersBeware |
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May 16, 09, 03:51AM
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Humble, you are correct. This not-so-clever AD was posted by the same, "blogspot.com" bozos/shills from India who have littered this forum with a constant stream of ads and bad acting for weeks. Here's their blogspot version:
ukessayswriting.blogspot.com
Needless to say, the quality of both their design and writing is atrocious.
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Edited by: WritersBeware May 16, 09, 03:58AM
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By the way, the ukessaywriting.com "business plan" is strangely similar to that of another, low-priced company from India/Pakistan that would simply steal papers from the Internet and fraudulently/illegally deliver them to unsuspecting customers as "custom writing." For a lawless company with no writers to compensate, it's the perfect scam. If a customer doesn't detect the plagiarism and submits payment, great! If the customer does discover the plagiarism and refuses to pay, there's no loss to the scammer.
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May 16, 09, 04:04AM
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@humble
This is totally sick on your part! The thread is not advertisement of any company. This totally related to the theme of the forum. The thread actually gives you the solution for "how to avoid scam?"
The thread may seem so much directed to purchase because it is talking about something I have not find online any where...
Now what is the criteria for judging them scam?
This section develops an interest in the service and highlights the unique feature of this service i.e Students are only supposed to make payment if they find their paper to be non-plagiarized and as per his/her specification
When you yourself is saying that feature is unique then how specifying it over here in relation of being scam can be deemed as advertisement? This is the main reason why I have put this question over here.
The ad does not leave the readers with any question it explicitly asks them to visit the page which is a prerequisite for making a purchase.
Just to make them belief what I am talking about! I started this thread in another forums and people are not ready to accept my statement for being true!! And visiting the page doesn't direct them to purchase but to try [u]their service without spending a single dime to them for scam inquiry!!![/u] This does make sense since I mentioned that I didn't pay them.
If you think the post violates the rule them remove the sales-page link of my post please!
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| WritersBeware |
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May 16, 09, 04:12AM
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Kind_warrior already posted the same garbage at student.com and it was promptly deleted. Here's the link to the Yahoo cache version:
http://74.6.239.67/search/cache?ei=UTF-8&p=http%3A%2F%2Fforums.student. com%2Fviewtopic.php%3Ft%3D328384&fr=sfp&u=forums.student.com/viewto pic.php%3Ft%3D328384&d=OVVXqUxISxtq&icp=1&.intl=us
The cache will soon expire, so here's a screen capture:
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| kind_warrior |
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May 16, 09, 04:18AM
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Yes I introduced the same service in another forum but they deleted my post!
By the way, the ukessaywriting.com "business plan" is strangely similar to that of another, low-priced company from India/Pakistan that would simply steal papers from the Internet and fraudulently/illegally deliver them to unsuspecting customers as "custom writing." For a lawless company with no writers to compensate, it's the perfect scam. If a customer doesn't detect the plagiarism and submits payment, great! If the customer does discover the plagiarism and refuses to pay, there's no loss to the scammer.
I'd simply never give a dime to the service if I find my essay to be plagiarized!
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Edited by: WritersBeware May 16, 09, 04:21AM
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kind_warrior: I'd simply never give a dime to the service if I find my essay to be plagiarized!
Um, if you're going to quote me, don't intentionally cut the quote short.
WritersBeware: For a lawless company with no writers to compensate, it's the perfect scam. If a customer doesn't detect the plagiarism and submits payment, great! If the customer does discover the plagiarism and refuses to pay, there's no loss to the scammer.
By the way, nice touch with the question mark at the end of your thread title. Sly, indeed.
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Edited by: OxbridgeResearchers May 16, 09, 04:27AM
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kind_warrior: @humble This is totally sick on your part! The thread is not advertisement of any company.
Humble made a very strong argument and clear argument - nothing sick about it ...
WritersBeware: Kind_warrior already posted the same garbage at student.com and it was promptly deleted. Here's the link to the Yahoo cache version:
WB - characteristically exposed your true intentions through the use of irrefutable evidence. She even had you admit:
kind_warrior: Yes I introduced the same service in another forum but they deleted my post!
Hats off to WB and Humble.
WB - you really were missed!
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May 16, 09, 04:41AM
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OxbridgeResearchers: Hats off to WB and Humble. WB - you really were missed!
Grazie!
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May 16, 09, 04:58AM
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WritersBeware: This is totally sick on your part! The thread is not advertisement of any company. This totally related to the theme of the forum. The thread actually gives you the solution for "how to avoid scam?"
This forum is not for solutions :)
FYI it was only an analysis. I did not use the word SCAM in my post. I only analyzed an ad.
The thread topic says
UK Essay Writing Service That Delivers Your Paper First Before Charging Any Fees?
But you have already experienced the service. Why in the world would you ask the question after you have experienced
the service. LOL
I hold professional expertise in advertisement, consumer behavior and other aspects of marketing.
So what were you trying to do ask a question or make them believe your claims :)
kind_warrior: Just to make them belief what I am talking about! |
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