| prowritergr |
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Dec 11, 11, 08:52AM
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Hello people, i am a newcomer on this forum. I am writing essays since 2001 and this year i start my own student services office in Greece. I have worked with some "well known" figures such as P.Richardson (i noticed many threads for his firm). I also noted that some "employers" here are very aggressive towards the writers, which is not fair.
Lemme tell u something from my own experience. Whenever you see promised such as 1st class and etc. etc...this is B.S. The student / client is responsible for his action. When you ask from someone to prepare a custom made essay you know that you are responsible for being lazy instead of sitting your arse down and typing your essay. In my own view,the best practice is the face-to-face contact between the client and the writer (whenever this is possible). This has numerous benefits and surely you know that there is no such as guy named Dhj2385 but a real writer. The student is obliged to bring notes, comments, books or whatever needed. Since the writer delivers the essay ontime, which is days before the deadline, then it is the student's responsibility to check the assignment and to fell free to make comments, remarks and etc. Again...i remind u, the paper belongs to the student, he is the responsible one. My responsibility is to deliver the assignment on time make sure that the writer did his best and that he is happy with the payments and on general with the attitude of the offices towards its writers...above all i never promise anything..i promise for our best effort....i laugh whenever i see 1st class promises and etc..dont get fool...the tutor / examiner knows who has written the assignment on his own and how cheated......
anyway..writers are humans....when they are not paid or they are poorly paid they dont perform well...on one of the officers that i work for...i use to ask for a price...say 100 euros for an assignment and when i get paid they say....hm...u ll get 70 euros coz the student did not pay...the student did that...and that and that....and B.S.....Hence...whenever i ve to write something for those folks i ll just give the minimum effort....i really dont care...but when i know that the office will pay me ontime..without hesitation and they will respect my work..then i ll give my best effort. This is how it works folks...
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| PastelLetters |
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Dec 31, 11, 10:27PM
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Your post has the potential to become a true life changer for me. I have always dreamed to be a marine biologist. Now I finally know that I don't need any education to become one. All I have to do is to kindly ask you The Secret through which you have become a professional writer.
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| PastelLetters |
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Dec 31, 11, 11:55PM
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I beg your pardon. I wish to be your editor if you have an open position.
"Hello people" >>> Are you serious? I expected you will say next that you came in peace.
"I am" Capitalize on your talents and use capital I instead.
"a newcomer on this forum" >>> One can come and go 'to' not on, unless you are an alien who landed 'on this forum'
"I am writing essays since 2001" >>> No. Really? Try this for a change: 'I have been writing essays since 2001'
"and this year i start my own student services office in Greece." >>>> Again, be proud of your exquisite talent and use the majuscule 'I'; after you do that change '"start" to 'started' please.
"I have worked with some "well known" figures such as P.Richardson (i noticed many threads for his firm)" >>>>> Perhaps the fame of a "figure such as P. Richardson" made such an impression that you can't get rid of the minuscule 'I'.
"I also noted that some "employers" here are very aggressive towards the writers, which is not fair." >>> So far they seem to be too mellow towards you. Oh and by the way I understand the depths of your modestly but please use a capital I.
"Lemme tell u something from my own experience." >>>> Lame to hear you.
"Whenever you see promised such as 1st class and etc. etc." >>> Instead use the word 'promises'; also one etc is enough as it means etcetera which in turn means 'and other things'. One cannot use 'and other things' twice or trice or etc.
"The student / client is responsible for his action" >>>> Clearly not the writer.
"When you ask from someone to prepare a custom made essay you know that you are responsible for being lazy instead of sitting your arse down and typing your essay." >>>> Change "ask from someone" to 'ask someone' (remember you included the verb "to prepare").
"In my own view, the best practice is the face-to-face contact between the client and the writer (whenever this is possible)." >>>>> In your case I strongly suggest to avoid a 'face to face' meeting. You truly don't want to incur the wrath of a student who got graded upon your superb penmanship.
"This has numerous benefits and surely you know that there is no such as guy named Dhj2385 but a real writer." >>> Please change"as guy" to 'a guy'. That is what a "real writer" would do.
"The student is obliged to bring notes, comments, books or whatever needed." >>>> In this case "whatever needed" would be a big gun. Better to show the writer what stakes he is playing for.
"Since the writer delivers the essay ontime, which is days before the deadline, then it is the student's responsibility to check the assignment and to fell free to make comments, remarks and etc." >>>> I suggest to change "ontime" to 'on time'. Then change "fell" (chopping wood will not make more papers) to 'feel' and avoid in your composition the use of "to" twice within four words (to feel free to). As such, feel free making any comments or remarks.
"Again...i remind u, the paper belongs to the student, he is the responsible one." Majuscule yourself, give us the 'you' respect rather than "u".
"My responsibility is to deliver the assignment on time make sure that the writer did his best and that he is happy with the payments and on general with the attitude of the offices towards its writers...above all i never promise anything..i promise for our best effort....i laugh whenever i see 1st class promises and etc..dont get fool...the tutor / examiner knows who has written the assignment on his own and how cheated......" >>>> Well, this is a mouthful. Put a coma after "on time", change "on general" to 'in general', offices do not have an attitude (they are inanimate), majuscule "i" three times, "dont" should be written as 'don't', change "fool" to 'fooled', change "how cheated" to 'who cheated' and finally, I thank God you only make the promise to do your best; just don't be to clear on what "your best" really means.
"anyway..writers are humans...." >>>> I thought so too. After reading your post I am not so sure anymore.
"when they are not paid or they are poorly paid they dont perform well..." >>>> Change "dont" to 'don't'. I suspect that you have been paid poorly lately.
"on one of the officers that i work for" >>>> If it is not your parole officer you work ON, then perhaps the change should look like 'in one of the offices I work for'.
"...i use to ask for a price...say 100 euros for an assignment and when i get paid they say....hm...u ll get 70 euros coz the student did not pay...the student did that...and that and that....and B.S..... >>> Majuscule "i" and capitalize Euros unless you are referring to the noun 'euro' as the wallaroo kangaroo. Hmm, should sound like this, not just one m."U ll" should be 'you'll' and "coz" is because. I hope I deciphered the message correctly.
"Hence...whenever i ve to write something for those folks i ll just give the minimum effort....i really dont care...but when i know that the office will pay me ontime..without hesitation and they will respect my work..then i ll give my best effort. This is how it works folks..." >>> I admit, the minimum effort (if it can be called that) is unmistakable. Change the two "I ve", the two "I ll", "ontime" to 'on time', capitalize the "i". After you have done all this, the OFFICE will pay you without hesitation and show you enormous respect. I would. I would never consider having a guy like you coming after me, it could turn out to be contagious.
Regards.
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| WritersBeware |
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Jan 1, 12, 03:45AM
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That is officially the most excruciating post in the history of this forum. My eyes are bleeding.
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| amnateeb |
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Jan 1, 12, 05:52AM
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Staggering. ROTFLMAO!
PastelLetters, I can sense that you took prowritergr's post too seriously as that badly hurt your true emotions associated with English language. I tip my hat to you that you dared to edit prowritergr's ("a real writer's") "original, unmatched piece of ENGLISH writing" which is remarkably written with "minimum effort" by a "human", and you redacted it incredibly well. Lol!
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| prowritergr |
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Jan 7, 12, 10:16AM
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some comments are so so sad.....
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| MeoKhan |
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Jan 8, 12, 06:33AM
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prowritergr: some comments are so so sad
Not some comments, only one post by PastelLetters who showed his/her intellect to so great an extent that this person has lost it altogether because after commenting on your post so diligently, that person threw a request for someone to write his/her paper. How sad. So, in this way you should be happy that your post has made a scholastic writer go nuts! Haha.
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| prowritergr |
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Jan 8, 12, 06:55AM
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i agree. what i really mean is that...if your dont pay your writers properly, dont expect them to produce 1st or even 2nd class projects.
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| MeoKhan |
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Jan 8, 12, 07:14AM
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That's absolutely correct. However, it's important for writers today to be VERY careful of the student-scams. So the best strategy is to ask them to pay upfront. Otherwise, the writer is sure inviting to be knocked out and in this case it is the likely fault of the writer and not of the scamming client.
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| prowritergr |
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Jan 8, 12, 08:03AM
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eah, this is tricky...on most of the cases i ask them to pay in advance
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| MeoKhan |
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Jan 8, 12, 12:15PM
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That's really great.
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