| essaybrah |
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Jun 8, 11, 01:07PM
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Hey all,
So I noticed a lot of essay writing companies are
-Expensive
-Outsourced
-Not always reliable
-Some even rob people of their money by not delivering the product
I went ahead and launched my site and put an emphasis that all writers are North American residents and university graduates. We aren't outsourced. We are very reliable and have a great reputation amongst our current client base.
Is there any other way I can communicate this or make people realize that my company is legitimate?
What do you guys look for when trying to determine if an essay company is legitimate?
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 8, 11, 01:19PM
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Launched this site not too long ago.
Would like this to serve as a sticky for future or past customers to write reviews.
Great opportunity for dialog with both satisfied and unsatisfied customers.
Mods, if this is inappropriate, please delete
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 8, 11, 01:21PM
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You charge an extra $10 for a works cited page and started out on a body building forum. There are numerous errors in your webcopy and in your posts, and your pool of writers is too small to handle any sort of volume.
Go back, build a better business model, and then try marketing that doesn't involve scamming.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 8, 11, 01:29PM
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Alright. I am just trying to be honest with my prospective clients. How do you know the size of my pool of writers?
And what is it about my business that involves scamming?
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 8, 11, 01:46PM
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essaybrah: If you can become efficient at writing and have a entrepreneurial mindset, the situation can certainly be optimized.
I feel so sorry for your customers right now....
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| essaybrah |
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Edited by: essaybrah Jun 8, 11, 02:03PM
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pheelyks: I feel so sorry for your customers right now....
Okay. Really just here for a constructive discussion. Not for blind judgement.
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 8, 11, 02:18PM
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essaybrah: Not for blind judgement.
It isn't "blind judgment." I'm judging your writing capabilities based on your writing. I don't know what you're charging your customers, but if it's more than a few bucks a page they're getting ripped off.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 8, 11, 02:21PM
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pheelyks: It isn't "blind judgment." I'm judging your writing capabilities based on your writing. I don't know what you're charging your customers, but if it's more than a few bucks a page they're getting ripped off.
Okay. So what portions of my site need improvement?
In terms of grammar, syntax,etc.
Honestly I've a client base of about 80 uni and college kids who have reaped great results from me. I have an entire following of patrons on the bodybuilding forum.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 01:38PM
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Why is everyone so angry?
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 01:42PM
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essaybrah: Why is everyone so angry?
It's not anger. It's disbelief that someone with your lack of writing ability would be charging money for writing services. And annoyance that you think this forum is a place for you to advertise, just like the countless other scammers and dimwits that come through here on a revolving basis.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 01:47PM
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pheelyks: It's not anger. It's disbelief that someone with your lack of writing ability would be charging money for writing services. And annoyance that you think this forum is a place for you to advertise, just like the countless other scammers and dimwits that come through here on a revolving basis.
I haven't said anything about my services since I was told not to the first time
You must do a good job of chasing people out as this forum seems to be primarily occupied by you. However, I see the benefit of sticking around here, so I have no intention of leaving.
And in regards to my writing services, keep disbelieving :)
Good luck with your writing goals in 2011
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:11PM
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essaybrah: knaw what i mean?
No, I don't know what you mean by "successful business." Having a website up for about two weeks and offering a low-quality service doesn't constitute "success" in my book.
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:14PM
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essaybrah: And in regards to my writing services, keep disbelieving
Again, you're using words you clearly don't understand. I don't "disbelieve" your writing services. I think they are of poor quality, because I can see your writing abilities on this forum. Your meathead customers might not be able to tell the difference between the crap you produce and quality academic writing, but others definitely can.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:14PM
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pheelyks: No, I don't know what you mean by "successful business." Having a website up for about two weeks and offering a low-quality service doesn't constitute "success" in my book.
I've actually been running my service for 3 months. Website came later after I established my client base after being encouraged to set up a store front by them.
To me success is running a very profitable and sustainable business. I run my gig in a very customer-centric manner where I put an extra effort in customer retention.
So yeah, successful in my perspective is a high level of lucrativeness + high customer retention
However, we are all entitled to our own opinions of what successful is :)
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| essaybrah |
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Edited by: essaybrah Jun 11, 11, 03:16PM
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pheelyks: Again, you're using words you clearly don't understand. I don't "disbelieve" your writing services. I think they are of poor quality, because I can see your writing abilities on this forum. Your meathead customers might not be able to tell the difference between the crap you produce and quality academic writing, but others definitely can.
Not all of my customers are off BB.com. I've already began projects on a few customers I've gotten through here this past week. Additionally I've began building my international student clients locally. Either way they are all getting good marks :). So that says something.
And I clearly put a different effort in my papers versus a forum. Reason being papers pay, forum posts don't. :)
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:18PM
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essaybrah: Website came later after I established my client base after being encouraged to set up a store front by them.
Good lord....people seriously pay you for your writing?
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:19PM
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pheelyks: Good lord....people seriously pay you for your writing?
Yep.
Its not that hard.
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:19PM
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essaybrah: And I clearly put a different effort in my papers versus a forum. Reason being papers pay, forum posts don't.
People always use this excuse. I also put more "effort" into the things I get paid to write, but I don't use words incorrectly or suddenly forget basic rules of grammar just because I'm typing on a forum. You either possess a certain level of language skills or you don't. In your case, it's the latter.
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:20PM
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essaybrah: Yep. Its not that hard.
Customers, beware.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:23PM
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pheelyks: People always use this excuse. I also put more "effort" into the things I get paid to write, but I don't use words incorrectly or suddenly forget basic rules of grammar just because I'm typing on a forum. You either possess a certain level of language skills or you don't. In your case, it's the latter.
O I C
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:24PM
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I like how clever you get when you run out of arguments.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:24PM
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pheelyks: Customers, beware.
Yes beware that its not that difficult to pump out a good paper :). All you have to do is develop an efficient process for writing.
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:26PM
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The amount you don't know about how crappy your writing is really scares me.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:27PM
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pheelyks: The amount you don't know about how crappy your writing is really scares me.
http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lgi6ivzj7W1qh6k96o1_500.png
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 03:28PM
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Uh huh.
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| Perry Gamsby |
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Jun 11, 11, 07:29PM
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Did you post the url and it was removed? Hard to discuss what we can't see.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 07:33PM
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Perry Gamsby: Did you post the url and it was removed? Hard to discuss what we can't see.
Yeah. I was a bit ignorant though. Didn't know we couldn't post URLs at all. But I got a lot of constructive feedback. As much as animosity there is towards me since I joined a couple days ago, I've learned a lot about ways to improve my site and cover my butt.
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| WritersBeware |
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Jun 11, 11, 09:08PM
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Dude, please STOP quoting the date and time!
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 09:10PM
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essaybrah: As much as animosity there is towards me since I joined a couple days ago, I've learned a lot about ways to improve my site and cover my butt
Though not the actual product delivered, apparently.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 09:22PM
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pheelyks: Though not the actual product delivered, apparently.
O I C
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 09:26PM
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O U Suck
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 11, 11, 09:29PM
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WritersBeware: Dude, please STOP quoting the date and time!
And mangling your native tongue.
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Edited by: essaybrah Jun 11, 11, 09:32PM
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pheelyks
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pheelyks: And mangling your native tongue.
L0L w0t
I no understand ilnglesh brah? Help out me plz
What do?
Are you really that mad that I'm generating so many leads with my 'horrible English'?
If so , you can always ignore me.
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| essaybrah |
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Jun 11, 11, 09:33PM
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WritersBeware: Dude, please STOP quoting the date and time!
Okah brah, you from the west coast?
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 12, 11, 09:05AM
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essaybrah: Are you really that mad that I'm generating so many leads with my 'horrible English'?
I probably make at least twice what you do and have plenty of work, so no. The fact that you don't even know how much you suck bothers me a little, but the fact that your website is a complete joke is some consolation.
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Jun 12, 11, 11:50AM
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pheelyks: I probably make at least twice what you do and have plenty of work, so no. The fact that you don't even know how much you suck bothers me a little, but the fact that your website is a complete joke is some consolation.
Your first claim is quite invalid. Unless you have access to my books and records :). Which I don't think you do.
But its good to know you're bothered. That would explain all this anger you hold behind the anonymity of a computer screen.
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| MeoKhan |
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Jun 12, 11, 12:14PM
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EssayBrah why don't know make serious posts if you really care to stay here. Why are you wasting your time in such nonsense? You're wasting our time as well.
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Edited by: essaybrah Jun 12, 11, 12:27PM
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Khan,
I certainly understand and respect your request. I joined this forum to share ideas and brainstorm with other writers. I've created a handful of great threads.
But everytime I create a thread for discussion,Felix decides to derail it and start trolling.
If you Want to help you can always re-direct this discussion to it's original topic.
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| MeoKhan |
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Edited by: MeoKhan Jun 12, 11, 12:32PM
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EB, don't mind but if you go through your posts, you'll not find it hard to admit that few make sense. It's not the policy of this forum to market yourself. So besides any publicity, if you make any useful/meaningful posts, even Pheelyks would really come forward to co-construct them with you. He doesn't ping sensible posters.
If you see the first feedback by him, it's absolutely constructive; it's only later on that you annoyed him. I hope you understand my point.
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| pheelyks |
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Jun 12, 11, 12:34PM
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essaybrah: That would explain all this anger you hold behind the anonymity of a computer screen.
If you'd like to meet in person for a private English tutoring lesson, I would be more than happy to oblige. I charge $100/hour.
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